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The Changing of the Guard 5730

Title: The Changing of the Guard

Author: Rarity's Stallion

email address: [email protected]

Tags: [Dark]

Synopsis: After Twilight is crown by Celestia and Luna as the sole princess of Equestria and left to govern the land by herself, Equestria is thrown into an armed conflict with the Griffon Nation. While necessary measures are undertaken to ensure Equestria's security, these measures along with the war effort sew seeds of discontent. This discontent soon boils over into a full-scale revolt that threatens the very throne upon which Twilight sits.

Link (FimFiction): http://www.fimfiction.net/story/94220/the-changing-of-the-guard

Chapters to be reviewed: All posted

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>these measures along with the war effort sew seeds of discontent
>these measures, along with the war effort, sow the seeds of discontent.
A mild improvement.

soundslikeponies!bQsJPGMNfw 5733

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Y'mean to post this in a review thread, sugarcube?

Post it in the training grounds and I'll get workin' on a review of the chapters shortly. I'm feeling a mite bit spontaneous right now.
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