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A work in progress Anonymous 4765Locked

So, I've made a rough draft of the first chapter/Prologue of a crossover fanfic. I would appreciate the good folks here at /fic/ to take a look. I'm fairly new to this fanfiction business, so I think any advice that isn't "give up" should somewhat work.

Warning, Angry Birds content ahead.

Here's a link: http://pastebin.com/4deKJPPj

Again, any feedback is welcome.


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>mfw Angry Birds fanfiction is a thing.

Boom Blox is better.

Anonymous 4768

Er… that doesn't really help me, but okay.

## Mod 4769

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Here's a bit of advice: If you expect people here to read your story, you're going to have to do a bit of reading yourself. Namely, the stickied post at the top of /fic/ (>>158). There's stuff you should know about posting here, like how to tag threads, where to get help for a story you're trying to write, etc. If you have questions, you can email me at the address in my name, since I'm locking the thread.

If that's not satisfying enough, here's some other advice, which I'm giving as a reader/writer and not a mod: Don't show people your "rough drafts." There's no point in having people point out things you already know if you're going to work on it anyways, and it wastes time and effort for all parties involved.

Welcome to /fic/, where you can't go three threads without tripping over some kind of help-authors-out thread or other.

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