>but the book is technically fanfiction
In that it's not considered canon?
>Twilight had received her very own set of wings. Real Pegasus wings!
First of all, that's worded the way I might say "A set of antlers mounted on the wall. Real
moose antlers!" I can't help but imagine Twilight ripping the wings off a hapless pegasus and absorbing them into her body.
Also, the pony species would appear to need their names capitalized, although I wouldn't expect a young child's story to be particularly observant of the finer mechanical details. Something to consider, perhaps.
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