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Review Request: Phantoms Of The Past Acetriggerhappy 4447

Title: Phantoms Of The Past
Author: AceTriggerhappy
Tags:Tragedy Dark Random Adventure Alternate Universe Human
Word count: 23,199 (6 chapters so far)

Synopsis: In Equestria, there is a comet that is believed to be an omen of great things to come. There are those who don't believe in it, and claim that is just a legend. They are proven wrong.

Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/79760/phantoms-of-the-past

Looking for some one to review & criticize it so i can improve it


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