Cool post, bro. But you forgot to tick "Mature Content" so I'm asking the mods to do that.
If you want critical feedback, you should also check the sticky and post in a review thread. (Red Fic District and Applejinx take clop in thread. Eustatian and Tactical by e-mail - see the RFD thread.)
If you just want attention, well this is a pretty low-traffic board. Attention tends to be intense and critical, just a heads up.
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