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Friendship isn't exactly all that sexual 3270

Hello there! I would just like to ask for feedback and editing help with my fanfiction, if at all possible!

Story Description: "Spike starts using his writing talents for more than just friendship reports. But when one of his more… embarrassing works is accidentally leaked to the public, Spike gets on the nerves of his best friends."

Below I have placed links to both versions of it (clean and explicit) for your convenience. I hope you enjoy the story!

Explicit: SNIP

Clean: http://sectussection.deviantart.com/#/d5qvz3m

#Story #Comedy
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Ion-Sturm 3272

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>What you wanted

Ion-Sturm 3273

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>What you're getting

Read the sticky, please and thank you.

Tactical!fRainBOoMw 3277

But you have to admit it's cute. The premise and the picture, I mean.

Eustatian!Wings60m9. 3280

Mod snipped the link to the uncut version? Interesting…

Head on up to "settings" -> "show mature content" and you're more than welcome to request feedback for it in one of the Mature threads. Currently there's Red Fic District, which is a low-traffic whoever-gives-feedback type thing, and Applejinx's thread; he looks at the conceptual / plot / character level and is gently-tough on new talent.

No guarantees on speed: I'm busy at the moment with my AFK life*, Tactical seems to be playing catch-up, Applejinx is finishing up (yet another!) novel, and Kinsley isn't too active recently. But you won't know until you try.

*Moving out of my parents' basement. It was time.

And there are all sorts of resources for the SFW cut.
> feedback and editing help
= look at existing threads and pick which one you like best.

!!Spike ## Mod 3281

>>3280
This. I would have posted it myself, but my internet decided to die as I hit New Reply. Thanks, Eustatian.

Sectus, the links to the Mature review threads can be found at the directory ( >>159 ). You may also want to look over the sticky again at >>158 to see how things work. It may seem long, but it's much shorter than your standard fic. Not to mention you're on a board about reading and writing—it should be simple enough.

Anonymous 3282

>>3280
>Applejinx's thread; he looks at the … plot
Don't we all? ;D

Tactical!fRainBOoMw 3284

>>3280

I'm not that busy. School just started for me, but that's not a big deal, and in fact it means days off from my slave labor "job." Really, I'm not a bad person to go to for reviews right now.

I actually blitzed through something like 40k words of Dashie's Foaling in one night.

...this post has been rated "sage" for lack of content... 3286

>>3282

> "plot" = "ass"


Beep-beep, I'm a bwob and Trixie's eating pinecones. Let's all write PinkieDash fics with Gilda grudge-screwing them both and - holy crap - is filly Nightmare Moon reallygoing to have Twilight executed?!

Season 1 fandom called to say it was 20% cooler.

3290

I just talked to Season 2 Fandom, and she told me that bronies really suck at memes.


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