#Editing Help #Pre-readers welcome #Story in Progress
First time posting here. Bear with me.
So I've written the story Apples and Wheat and it's gotten surprisingly good reception. However, I've been told it needs a bit lore polish by the EqD pre-readers. I'm not exactly bent on getting my story on EqD, but it would nice.
Anyways, the main reason I'm putting this up for critiquing is improve my writing plus I'm bored out of mind.
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Tags: Comedy Crossover Slice of Life
The Apple Family decides to plant wheat this year and end up with a surprise house guest.
How will the Apple clan handle having a wolf in their home? Let alone, a Wise Wolf that's obsessed with sweet succulent juicy apples?
In a nut shell it's a crossover of Spice and Wolf with MLP. The main focus is how the Apples handle have Holo in their home. How Holo handles being with the Apples and in Ponyville. Plus I explain/explore the relationship that Holo and Granny Smith have in chapter 3.
FIMFiction Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/67672/apples-and-wheat
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