First off, welcome to fic.
Secondly, you should not post your story as a thread. There are plenty of reviewers here who will look at your story, should you request it in the appropriate place. There's The Training Grounds, if you just want someone to look at it, and then there are more specific reviewers who run their own threads and who are known for being remarkably helpful, if at times harsh as well.
Conch Shell runs a nice idea thread, if you need a place a person to bounce thought off of.
However, making a whole thread for one story is generally frowned upon here.
That said, best of luck to you, and I hope you find your place here.
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