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File: 1349506606370.jpg (36.48 KB, 679x510, image.jpg)

More of an constructive critique for my work in this thread. FPP 818

Understand I have very dodgy Internet, not gonna be here for long, couldn't directly receive the image, so I had to screenshot it, which is over to the left. My main concern is perspective or the button string's color, since come people says it looks like X for dead. I temporarily have the resources to draw more, but I definitely need to learn to draw better so I can let go when it's time to let go.

Perspective for this photo is like, is it 3/4th or is part of it actually in a shifted position, which ruins the streamlining, and makes it look like a Picasso painting.

Understand?
Btw, is my drawing good? Learning to draw more than just heads.

FPP 820

Drew this in class after finishing my work.

My home tablet (bamboo connect) 's micro USB side broke, so one is on its way now.

Can't draw for shit on MSPaint with a mouse.

Whetever I use Photoshop for drawing, my art skills seems to multiply. I dunno, is it a placebo?

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File: 1349562643607.png (40.7 KB, 600x600, final_work_3.png)

>>820

Internet is up now, so here.

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File: 1349562664183.png (38.53 KB, 424x319, Final work 3.png)

>>821
Fuck, I mean here.

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>>822

And apparently, no one gives a fuck.

Anonymous 842

I don't see any glaring flaws or obvious things that need improvement. What are your areas of concern?

FPP 843

>>842


You know, improper perspective?

Like a person's countance in a typical Pisacco painting, but less severe?

FPP 844

>>843

For example, I think the eye button away from the view seems off.

Anonymous 845

>>844
I think it just needs a slight, millimeter or so turn inward. The rest of the head and face are fine, really, perhaps the nostrils could use a bit of turn.

FPP 860

File: 1350188410651.png (73.79 KB, 1906x3804, BLSH.png)

Studied it, decided it was the right perspective.

But the other image, What is the flaw?

turntechGodhead 867

Not really an artist, just wanted to say…
Scalemate looks cool. And honestly this looks good to me.

FPP 945

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>>867

Well, thanks.

Kind of working on the anatomy.

Limbs are my biggest problem, along with Body Height/Width ratio.

Got some eye outlines here (Blue spot's size is irrelevant at the moment, it just a stand in for the button.)

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File: 1350870416714.png (141.85 KB, 1189x1042, working_edit_fem.png)

>>945

This is the default fem. version (still working on it, for some variety)

FPP 947

>>946

Also a pet peeve is on top of the head on both version (it's canon in-comic, but I can't figure out how to put some distance between the tips)

FPP 948

>>947

Ah, I found a solution.

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File: 1350877235777.png (24.01 KB, 1189x1042, gdfgfdg.png)

>>948

Unrelated, here's a really rough sketch of the back

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>>950
And a really early sketch of the side (I am more expert at editing, than drawing, so I reuse things or warp them)

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File: 1350934432888.png (36.41 KB, 1600x900, Lucas in Limbo(You're not the …)

Here's a Work-In-Progress.

>dat filename

FPP 963

>>962

How does the hand in the bubble looks?

964

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>>962
How are you colouring this?

FPP 967

>>964

Coloring? Two things:

For this project I'm extracting from Limbo, which is already black and white in the strict sense.

Another thing is, you mean the characters or the BG?

971

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>>967
I mean the white pixels surrounding the cliffs.

FPP 975

>>971

Well, I'm retexturing the cliffs soon though so…

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>>975

Do you like the hand?

978

File: 1350937554461.png (70.97 KB, 500x500, Fortuna Anthro WIP 2.png)

>>976
Best part of the image.
I suck at hands and usually hide them.

FPP 980

>>978

Just try to copy your hand. It worked for me pretty well. I can draw a full-pledged hand if I want to.

983

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>>980
I know how to draw a hand, just been preoccupied with hooves and things like them.

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File: 1350939161534.png (5.75 KB, 900x900, Untitled.png)

>>983

I have most of the time, an struggle with the face and the head size and shape of the ponies.

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File: 1350939633046.png (6.03 KB, 900x900, Untitled.png)

>>987

Not sure if this one is better

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File: 1351710614008.png (168.29 KB, 2880x2880, WORKING ON IT.png)

Some PNGs from a previous section

>with hoodie

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File: 1351710827669.png (56.58 KB, 600x600, working_edit_moving.png)

An even older piece.

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File: 1351717187175.png (237.46 KB, 2880x2880, working on it meh.png)

>>1199

>without hoodie, before nose edit

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>>1201
Am I improving?

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File: 1352157699272.png (268.86 KB, 2880x2662, WOWZA.png)

>Near final

>Colored

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File: 1352237975746.png (74.44 KB, 612x792, dhsyearbookad2.png)

Any critics today?

>Piece I'm working on today…

FPP 1235

>>1234

I need someone to help em with the background, sicne it's balnk :/

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>>1235
And no one speaks thus far…

>first time trying to draw a kid version of the plushdragon


>First time trying to draw a hat on a dragon, let alone a drooped beanie.

1247

>>1246
Well, people generally don't have the reference you have. You're drawing something that's definitely not a pony and we don't know what it is that it is.
Can you post the thing you're trying to draw as an example?

FPP 1249

>>1247

It's a scalemate.

The original doesn't look like what I draw at all…

http://images.wikia.com/mspaintadventures/images/8/80/Lemonsnout.png

Got inspired by this BEFORE I started drawing:

http://www.deviantart.com/download/184858789/mspa__terezi_x_lemonsnout_by_skepsisfox-d3225yd.jpg

But I VERY generally base it off these:

http://www.deviantart.com/download/256300413/scalemate_plushie_tutorial_by_eyes5-d48lenx.jpg


(Scalemate's the official name, but I like to use the word Plushdragon)

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>>1249

I mean slightly vague, not VERY GENERALLY.


>Final

1251

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>>1250
The middle one makes the best reference. It's somewhat like what you're trying to do. I'm no expert on this kind of thing but it looks like you want to do a thing like anthros.
Take the human body and look at what makes it up. Use the human base to work with things but make some of the features more animalistic. In this case make the hands more pointed like an anthro fox or a dragon's claw, the head shape should be based off of what you have and the rest should be moderately human.

FPP 1350

>>1251

Actually, I'm trying to do pointed fingers for females, and blocky fingers for males. If I do it anime-like, then I might do both.

And I'm trying to imply a MSPAFA later, which comes with a story and, with it, rules… So that's why I'm kind of not following the rules, because I'm trying to be a bit of my own niche.
I can explain the rules if you want.

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File: 1354570078466.png (115.98 KB, 1440x1440, front_head_work_2.png)

>Worst at front-view drawings

Proffesor Raie MF Oak!EoPoKEmon2 1551

File: 1354574196143.jpg (244.07 KB, 720x830, ....yeah nope.jpg)

>This will go so well

FPP 1583

I'm preparing for a MSPAFA soon, but … Why the pic ;_; (is blind from the picture)

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File: 1354647037892.png (109.48 KB, 1440x1440, front head work 2b.png)

>Improved?

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File: 1354647187310.png (123.5 KB, 1440x1440, front head work 4.png)

>Female


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